Choices

 

Life is never the same again as I always thought it should be.

You can’t control the way it flows,

 but you were given

 choices.

Author's Note

...i think it needed more line.. but then again its as good as it is to let the readers ponder and wonder.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the way you write, it`s comehow hidden, left on our mind, and somehow very clear too, and deep. I totally agree with that thoughts, many times choices are all we have, even they are so much confusing for someones life...If he has too different choices and if he can`t understand which one is the best?
so nice dear Pax!
nour~
4.07 pm
22.12.12

[FJ Davis]

Good that you recognize the power of choice.
It is best to set a goal, then make the choices that will get you there.
Nice work, Will.

[Pax]

as always you do have your insightful footprints you leave behind for me to wonder. thank you so much mr. frank.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Another insightful one. We make the choice, and choose the river.

[Pax]

thank you, i choose the river because its quite easier to handle that the waves of the oceans.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Just watch out for the rapids! ;)

[Pax]

*smiles*oh yeah..i'll definitely do..thanks.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a haunting wisdom here, especially for those of us who have made poor choices... been left empty handed in the breach. What an awesome insight into the heart and mind, and days gone by too soon.

[Pax]

thanks, mr. craig as always your thoughts leaves footprints..

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes we were. I love your drips of wisdom man. That's a really good one.

[Pax]

thanks my friend.

[Brandon Mathis]

i like it but it but you could of added choices that we make are never known, as in life you should never see, how it will all ends but that's just my thoughts on your poem