Choices

 

Life is never the same again as I always thought it should be.

You can’t control the way it flows,

 but you were given

 choices.

Author's Note

...i think it needed more line.. but then again its as good as it is to let the readers ponder and wonder.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the way you write, it`s comehow hidden, left on our mind, and somehow very clear too, and deep. I totally agree with that thoughts, many times choices are all we have, even they are so much confusing for someones life...If he has too different choices and if he can`t understand which one is the best?
so nice dear Pax!
nour~
4.07 pm
22.12.12

[dark light]

it is a short poem but a great truth is in it.good job

[Jamal]

i think it's fine. and very true

[Geraldine]

It's simple yet it's worth a million words. :) Full of meanings. I think it is already good as is. ^__^

[That_Girl]

Simple, but very true.

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Great job, Willyam. It is these specific choices that shape us into the individuals that we are. some of these decisions are wise, while others are not so wise. It is how we handle these situations which define our true character. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem tell the truth. Good to make wise choices. A bad decision sometimes can't be repaired. Thank you for the outstanding quote.
Coyote

[Pax]

as always my dear friend thank you. you reviews is always a pleasure to read.

[Legolas]

Oh, the choices in which we have. Life changing are some, insignificant are others but all do matter. Good job.

[Pax]

thank you my friend.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Simply put, splendid

[Pax]

thanks Waya, i appreciate your words.

[Corset]

no, it think it says it all perfectly as it is.

[Pax]

thank you. and i did leaved as it is.

[Ruth]

Have to agree, the line in the ether can be left to pluck at will for this speaks volumes as it is :) xoxo

[Pax]

thank you.