Choices

 

Life is never the same again as I always thought it should be.

You can’t control the way it flows,

 but you were given

 choices.

Author's Note

...i think it needed more line.. but then again its as good as it is to let the readers ponder and wonder.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the way you write, it`s comehow hidden, left on our mind, and somehow very clear too, and deep. I totally agree with that thoughts, many times choices are all we have, even they are so much confusing for someones life...If he has too different choices and if he can`t understand which one is the best?
so nice dear Pax!
nour~
4.07 pm
22.12.12

[Laura Maidah]

oops iPhone typo

[Pax]

lol..no probs..im glad you like this. thank you

[Laura Maidah]

kingdom of rock and sand

[Laura Maidah]

species

[Laura Maidah]

this is not nothing about something. it is something about nothing. genyus

[quixotic_rose]

Sometimes I wish I could control the way life flows, but then I probably wouldn't have all the good things that have come to me in life. Choices are everywhere if a person chooses to look for them. I like this, very philosophical in its ways, nice going :)

The thing in life is, it always can go different than we expected. We have ideals, but they are sometimes hard to achieve. The art is, to make from each new dissapointment, a new ideal, and give the paintbrush a twist. :) Very deep one, I loved this.

E.L.

[Sami Khalil]

Well said dear poet. Words of wisdom live forever so do the choices we make...

[Lost in Wonderland]

I like it this way, but you could add more lines too:) Either way the message is a strong one!
God Bless

[Audrey Howitt]

There is a lot of truth to this I think--

[.]

Explains greatly why we live. 100/100

[Pax]

wow thanks. Yes it is indeed.