Choices

 

Life is never the same again as I always thought it should be.

You can’t control the way it flows,

 but you were given

 choices.

Author's Note

...i think it needed more line.. but then again its as good as it is to let the readers ponder and wonder.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the way you write, it`s comehow hidden, left on our mind, and somehow very clear too, and deep. I totally agree with that thoughts, many times choices are all we have, even they are so much confusing for someones life...If he has too different choices and if he can`t understand which one is the best?
so nice dear Pax!
nour~
4.07 pm
22.12.12

[RachelReaper]

Another life lesson taught! You should have these quotes approved to be written on calenders as a kind of "word of the day" thing :)

[Pax]

I love what you suggest....maybe It can be...someday...we will never know...thank you my friend.

[RachelReaper]

:D

[Renée]

true .. the choices are very important.. strange feeling isn't it when you realize one phase of life has passed never to return...

[Annabelle Lee]

choices..... this is a good topic for a meaningful poem.. nice job

[Gothic Girl]

choices are there to either make us a better person or not.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

most definitely. Each day when we wake up we have a choice of how we choose to live our life.

[Extant]

I love it, simply. You just have a great way with short poetry, Willyam, no ore lines necessary. Yes, we ere all given choices, and even I turn around to my footprints and look at how my trial has veered and, in someplaces, disappeared.
Life never turns out how we think it should be, but that's why it's so interesting.

[Barbara Walker]

We pick our choices with the idea that it's the best one, but sometimes, we get surprised and it turns out completely the opposite of what we had hoped for. this is why crystal balls would come in so handy!
this statement really got me to thinking, which is a good thing for words to do!

[afra]

short but meaningful ....well done

[Junert]

Very true.