tears and memories

drips of wisdom 13, i separate it because i like to put a title to it for the mean time...i like tittles. hehe. ;D

Every tear is a release of emotional distress

it relieve our hearts burden for a time

But the pain never dies

It will just turn into a memory to remember by.

Author's Note

its a continuation of my principle Im ok...
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/willyampax/960420/

this will be add to later to my compilations of drips of wisdom.

being too alone gets me time to really think so this is what i came up
i was really intending to just write a poem but this is what i came up with..

tell me what you think and enjoy.

Reviews

[Dhaye]

My friend, you forgot to edit the pronoun "They" in the second line. It should be "It", referring to the "tear" which is singular. So it goes like "It relieves our hearts' burden for a time".

I like this quote. You put a title because you like titles? Actually, even a quote needs title... or just simply mention the concept. In my book Nuggets of Wisdom...there is a title which is the concept of the quotes.

I'm afraid if how many times I cry then the pain will not die, and the memory would always be remembered...aray ko. That means I would be sad forever. LOL.

Ganda ng book mo na to ha? Actually, I dreamed to make an inspirational book like this. Drips of Wisdom...Puro quotes. Yan yung namana ko sa iyo kaya nakakagawa na rin ako ng quotes. Hehe. Dami ko na pala natutunan sa iyo. Hehe. Yung description mo sa taas. Natuwa ako. Kasama pa talaga ang "Hehe ;D". LOL

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) grammar police. :)

[Pax]

LOL... nan diyan na si madam policewoman... :D sandali... publish ko uli to lahat...

[Dhaye]

Uy, hehe. Hindi naman po. Just helping our brother here. Ikaw naman...mamaya mo, mahawa sa iyo si Pax. Hehe. Napatawa ako ng malakas doon, ah. Bumalik yung term na police. Pg gumawa ako ng chapters ng book 2 ni Clarisse...yari na naman ako sa inyong dalwang police kayo. Hehe.

[Pax]

this book started from my twitter days.... kasi wala lng magawa... like sabi ko sayo out of the blue, quotes appeared...hehe... salamat pretty kabayan....

[Barbara Walker]

Truth in your words, but you are using present tense and past tense in two lines.
Edit
Every tear is a release of emotional distress
They relieve our heart's burden for a time,
but the pain never dies.
It will just turn into a memory to remember by.

[Pax]

thanks, i was really wondering about the S, now that proves it the tense was really wrong. Im glad with your help

[Barbara Walker]

Your welcome!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is magnificent and I completely love this! I'm the type to believe that crying does release all of that stress and forget about the world for a moment or two. I think that's how I see it anyway. Ha! Those memories are what gets me the most, like you said "But the pain never dies". Boy, that's for sure! Again, outstanding write. Keep up the good work. :)


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Pax]

thanks dear friend.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome:)

[Renée]

So True ( :

[afra]

wow......this was so deep ...well done

[Serenity Faith]

Tears being described by you are definite drips of wisdom indeed. Excellent Willyam! ^_^

[Pax]

thanks Miss Emily.

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Another beautiful piece. I love it

[Pax]

thank you, im glad you like it..

[Admiral Kirk]

This is great, tears are quite comforting if something's happened. I don't know why, but crying seems to make things feel better... But then listening to yourself cry makes you cry even more... Oh well. Great job, you speak the truth, yet again!

[Pax]

Yet again thanks. im really glad.

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem. :P

[Marie]

Tears do relieve the pain; that's what tears are for. But memories stay, scarring the heart...

[Pax]

memories fades the scarring in time but it does not completely gone, it was never gone. it just there reminding us..thanks for the review,..

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your statement. We learn from pain to be smarter and wiser if we are lucky. Thank you for the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Pax]

thank you, and i agree with you..

[Baby Ricochet]

"But the pain never dies/ It will just turn into a memory to remember by." THat's PTSD brotha. Great wisdom drip.

[Pax]

thanks can you elaborate more about brotha, i cant seems to find a definite definition in google..

[Baby Ricochet]

brother

[Pax]

oh..that's explains the one's male friend..thanks...again

[Baby Ricochet]

Exactly