tears and memories

drips of wisdom 13, i separate it because i like to put a title to it for the mean time...i like tittles. hehe. ;D

Every tear is a release of emotional distress

it relieve our hearts burden for a time

But the pain never dies

It will just turn into a memory to remember by.

Author's Note

its a continuation of my principle Im ok...
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/willyampax/960420/

this will be add to later to my compilations of drips of wisdom.

being too alone gets me time to really think so this is what i came up
i was really intending to just write a poem but this is what i came up with..

tell me what you think and enjoy.

Reviews

[Dhaye]

My friend, you forgot to edit the pronoun "They" in the second line. It should be "It", referring to the "tear" which is singular. So it goes like "It relieves our hearts' burden for a time".

I like this quote. You put a title because you like titles? Actually, even a quote needs title... or just simply mention the concept. In my book Nuggets of Wisdom...there is a title which is the concept of the quotes.

I'm afraid if how many times I cry then the pain will not die, and the memory would always be remembered...aray ko. That means I would be sad forever. LOL.

Ganda ng book mo na to ha? Actually, I dreamed to make an inspirational book like this. Drips of Wisdom...Puro quotes. Yan yung namana ko sa iyo kaya nakakagawa na rin ako ng quotes. Hehe. Dami ko na pala natutunan sa iyo. Hehe. Yung description mo sa taas. Natuwa ako. Kasama pa talaga ang "Hehe ;D". LOL

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) grammar police. :)

[Pax]

LOL... nan diyan na si madam policewoman... :D sandali... publish ko uli to lahat...

[Dhaye]

Uy, hehe. Hindi naman po. Just helping our brother here. Ikaw naman...mamaya mo, mahawa sa iyo si Pax. Hehe. Napatawa ako ng malakas doon, ah. Bumalik yung term na police. Pg gumawa ako ng chapters ng book 2 ni Clarisse...yari na naman ako sa inyong dalwang police kayo. Hehe.

[Pax]

this book started from my twitter days.... kasi wala lng magawa... like sabi ko sayo out of the blue, quotes appeared...hehe... salamat pretty kabayan....

[eeoopig]

There will always be emotional scars. You've got to learn to not forget it, but to accept it and move on. Good advice :D

[Laura Maidah]

tear. not tears.

[Pax]

now i wonder, somebody said its with 's' because at first i didnt put any..
can you explain why?

[eeoopig]

If you haven't figured it out yet, its because using the word "every" makes it a singular.
read moreIf you haven't figured it out yet, its because using the word "every" makes it a singular.

eg. every one, not every ones (unless it's "every one's", meaning "every one is")
every car, not every cars (again unless it's "every car's)

Hope this helps :D

[Pax]

oh yeah...thanks...I understand it now...

[BlackRose]

Wonderful poem. Again, this also true. We never forget but in time we will heal. The scar left will remind us that of what was or happened but will never stop from going and keeping on.

[Pax]

yup they do leave a scar. thanks, you understand it really well.

[BlackRose]

Yep, I've been there in those moments and felt the hurt at those times too.

[Legolas]

Great job! That is the truth about tears. They can help but not for long.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so true....................

[Pax]

thank you so much

[FJ Davis]

This is actually quite touching, Will--and demonstrates a certain wisdom.
(Speaking of hearts, you apparently have a good one.)

[Gothic Girl]

and yet another great poem from you sir. for me, my tears are the only things i can have to justify my existence every time i am lonely or sad. thanks for sharing this great piece sir. :)

[Extant]

"They relieved our heart's burden for a time,"
This is the line that got me, there is one part of a poem that can always tether my own life to its verses. I can remember weeping over knives inside my heart, but, yes, even now I can't seem to bring any tears to my eyes with the memory . . . on the other hand I happen to be a bitter and vengeful person . . .Taers are only a momentary solution.

[Pax]

sad, sad reality. there is truth in your words like 'tears are only a momentary solution.' the pain never dies but it heals leaving a big scar. the scar makes us bitter at times. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Extant]

Thank you for provoking them.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

This little drip of wisdom hits the spot with me, Willyam. My problem is that sometimes the tears won't flow and the distress get bottled up until it explodes. Great writing!

[Pax]

i've experience that...so i know..it hard and now i understand that tears is important part of moving on...

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Sending you wishes for cleansing tears.