You & I

       

Would it be okay if I say, I’ve had enough of your presence in my life?

You’re too much of everything I hate

of all the things, you annoy me.

I wish you were gone and would fade away like you never existed.

But still you were there reminding me

of all the wrong things,

The bad memories,

The irritating personalities,

                   The foolish behaviors,

                                      The selfish self,

                                                   and lastly

               The sad and gloomy

                State of mind.

I did something to hide you,

I can simply toss you aside,

Put a mask on your face,

        Do a charade

              Making you aware that you don’t exist,

              and a complete cover-up of make belief.

I’ve done everything possible I can to coat or erase your every existence

But then I realized you’re a part of me

That can never be erased

A reflection of me

The reality of me

 

You can never be without me   and    I can never be without you
because

all in all

you’re
me.

Author's Note

I did alot of edit in this one, its that i have some typo errors..
if you see anything just message me. thanks
enjoy.

i wrote this when i was really down with myself
i always blame myself.
thanks to all of the encouragement of WC friends here
Im glad i feel better now,
i got up, and keep strong in this life's challenges,
like i said in my drips of wisdom #5

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

This is tremendous!!!
The deep regret and self hatrid and perhaps blame laying waist to a mind. Articulated with a true talent and a great way with words.

There are alot of littered spelling mistakes, and general errors. That make it a little difficult to read in bits but a good proof-read will remove those.

[Pax]

done it, thanks.

[poeticpiers]

To accept yoursel warts and all is the beginning of wisdom

[Pax]

oh i dont have a virus..lol...just joking..i know what you mean..

And that's how real love goes my friend...
You're wise, to recognize, such a great ode to
You both. Loved to read this.

Elisa

[Serenity Faith]

Good for you! Our other selves are not-so-pretty at times, though I find yours rather beautiful. I love how you depicted that other part of you as another person in general. Very nicely done ^_^