You & I

       

Would it be okay if I say, I’ve had enough of your presence in my life?

You’re too much of everything I hate

of all the things, you annoy me.

I wish you were gone and would fade away like you never existed.

But still you were there reminding me

of all the wrong things,

The bad memories,

The irritating personalities,

                   The foolish behaviors,

                                      The selfish self,

                                                   and lastly

               The sad and gloomy

                State of mind.

I did something to hide you,

I can simply toss you aside,

Put a mask on your face,

        Do a charade

              Making you aware that you don’t exist,

              and a complete cover-up of make belief.

I’ve done everything possible I can to coat or erase your every existence

But then I realized you’re a part of me

That can never be erased

A reflection of me

The reality of me

 

You can never be without me   and    I can never be without you
because

all in all

you’re
me.

Author's Note

I did alot of edit in this one, its that i have some typo errors..
if you see anything just message me. thanks
enjoy.

i wrote this when i was really down with myself
i always blame myself.
thanks to all of the encouragement of WC friends here
Im glad i feel better now,
i got up, and keep strong in this life's challenges,
like i said in my drips of wisdom #5

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

This is tremendous!!!
The deep regret and self hatrid and perhaps blame laying waist to a mind. Articulated with a true talent and a great way with words.

There are alot of littered spelling mistakes, and general errors. That make it a little difficult to read in bits but a good proof-read will remove those.

[Pax]

done it, thanks.

[poeticpiers]

To accept yoursel warts and all is the beginning of wisdom

[Pax]

oh i dont have a virus..lol...just joking..i know what you mean..

[Revery]

This is epic. It is unique and strong and hits on a subject that we all can understand. Congratulations on an excellent write.

[BlackRose]

Feel the emotion coming off this piece. Beautifully done.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Great work..We do become one with a person of whom we are very intimate..They will always be part of us and our memories..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Inner demons are hard to fight. I believe we must learn to live with them. I like the story and the strong description in the poem. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dean Kuch®]

Fantastically dark, uniquely formatted, and flows with surgical like precision, this is very nicely done!

[Alex Vidmar]

Interesting. Love it.

[Marie]

I checked this for errors and didn't see any. The poem is beautifully set up. You can never escape from yourself.

[Maan]

The idea of this poem is something that every writer who writes for himself must once convey to its poem in one way or another. You have done it wonderfully, I have seen few mistake, do review it once, other than that everything about this poem is fantastic and perfectly arranged. Keep writing my friend and keep sharing. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was written well! One can feel the sadness and turmoil running though veins of emotions!

[Corset]

This is gorgeous! I loved the structure and the message, even the font is perfect...
love it!