You & I

       

Would it be okay if I say, I’ve had enough of your presence in my life?

You’re too much of everything I hate

of all the things, you annoy me.

I wish you were gone and would fade away like you never existed.

But still you were there reminding me

of all the wrong things,

The bad memories,

The irritating personalities,

                   The foolish behaviors,

                                      The selfish self,

                                                   and lastly

               The sad and gloomy

                State of mind.

I did something to hide you,

I can simply toss you aside,

Put a mask on your face,

        Do a charade

              Making you aware that you don’t exist,

              and a complete cover-up of make belief.

I’ve done everything possible I can to coat or erase your every existence

But then I realized you’re a part of me

That can never be erased

A reflection of me

The reality of me

 

You can never be without me   and    I can never be without you
because

all in all

you’re
me.

Author's Note

I did alot of edit in this one, its that i have some typo errors..
if you see anything just message me. thanks
enjoy.

i wrote this when i was really down with myself
i always blame myself.
thanks to all of the encouragement of WC friends here
Im glad i feel better now,
i got up, and keep strong in this life's challenges,
like i said in my drips of wisdom #5

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

This is tremendous!!!
The deep regret and self hatrid and perhaps blame laying waist to a mind. Articulated with a true talent and a great way with words.

There are alot of littered spelling mistakes, and general errors. That make it a little difficult to read in bits but a good proof-read will remove those.

[Pax]

done it, thanks.

[poeticpiers]

To accept yoursel warts and all is the beginning of wisdom

[Pax]

oh i dont have a virus..lol...just joking..i know what you mean..

[Laura Maidah]

very moving piece. sweeping and lyrical. nice work

[Maya Storm]

What a way to hate on ones self. I have been there I can't get away from me and I annoy me sometimes.

I like the layout, very artistic and the theme hits home with me. Good write.

[eeoopig]

Intense and deep. I love the way you formatted the poems. A bit darker than usual but I love dark poetry, so I love this. Thank you for sharing it :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

The raw openness of which you display your inner most feelings is what makes this piece very poignant. In life we beat ourselves down daily as we try and tackle with our alter ego's or one would say our second self.

I have up and down days and so does me................ :O)

A superb write

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is Profound! We can be our own worst enemy or critic. Very intense write!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Wow very deep and powerful write. At the beginning I thought this was about a fight, or breakup or betrayal, but in the end it was that all too tragic internal conflict. Nicely done!
God Bless

[MoriartyMesa]

Always wonderful and always a delight to read and to think on various thoughts.

[Baby Ricochet]

OOOh. That was good. I've felt like that before.

[Theresa]

Nice work. I like the form of this. Many can relate to a piece like this.