DarK Silence
A Poem by Pax
Listen to the silence
Corrupting the innocence
Savour its taste
Awaken its craze
Go and feel the sound of
emptiness
Stuttering calmness
Makes my blood boil
Tightening thrill
Gets my nerves straight
in the realization of my Loneliness.
© 2013 Pax
Author's Note
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sometimes loneliness/boredom makes you do something you might regret.
so stop while you still can..or think twice before you do it.
I made something much dark poetry..
when i wrote this there is something terrible/horrible about it.
i donno you judge
good and bad reviews are welcome and very much appreciated.
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This poem seems to me to mean more than just lonliness, it seems like there are so many interwoven meanings and theme's within this poem. I see corruption , i see childish dreams and dashed hopes, anger.. there is so much emotion printed into this piece and you masterfully present them all in a very well flowing piece.
I like the way you have presented the poem, the movement in the last line actually seems to be the brain making the realsation and makes it feel much more personal.
Lovely work
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
wow, you touch so many themes than i ever thought and i think you hit it all. thank You.
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12 Years Ago
thanks, i can't expand it anymore. I find it mysterious, so its quite ok the way it is..
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12 Years Ago
always a pleasure. thank you.
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12 Years Ago
wow, you touch so many themes than i ever thought and i think you hit it all. thank You.
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12 Years Ago
that just one thing on the theme. thank U
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12 Years Ago
i know right, that makes t scary. thank U.
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Added on July 8, 2012
Last Updated on March 11, 2013
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I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..
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