Blood Puddle

It's about how stress can over take the mind and make you feel like there is no other option then to let go.

As the blood ran down my arm
And as I went pale
The pain that felt so good
It strengthened my arm to take it
Take it with no regret

The tingling of the numbing pain
Filled my spine
Fast action of doubt
Never able to go back
As the fate of death
Is forever

As the blood dripped
The noise filling the thick air
As I lay in the basement
Eyes water with fear
There is one last thing
Death crossed my mind

Many options to take
I wondered if I should
If I even could
My life flashed
Before my eyes
And I arose
My knife was fierce
My eyes pierced the blade

I just want to be
Worry free
As I stood there
Thinking out my options
As I would loose everything
All my worries
All my fears
And also my life

Author's Note

It is not my deepest I am putting those on soon but I also just want to see how this one does its not great but tell me if u want to see more.

Reviews

[marie]

i like the poem seems like you wrote it after much planning, a little detached but still you shine through it in your own way :)

[amarlaksh]

Great composition!