Fiction Writing Style Test - Very Fast Read (only 348 words) - Please commentA Story by willmorganA sample of my writing style. Very short for easy reviewing. Need to know what people think about the style to continue or change it. (only 348 words)John
Grennings was leaving for work when his wife reminded him that Henry’s birthday
was the next day. Mary was excited to celebrate her child’s first birthday and
wanted everything to be perfect. Early experiences, such as these, were very
important for a child’s development, she had read once in a book. “Remember to bring the cake. I’ll keep
busy decorating the house for Henry’s party.” Mary told John. She grabbed a small
brown pouch, filled it with golden wrapped chocolate coins and put it next to
the other pouches and small treasure chests in the table filled with party
favors. She then went upstairs to check on his baby boy and found him wide
awake. He was poking his stuffed raccoon in the head with his tiny index finger.
Anybody would have guessed Mary was his mother. They both had the same blond
hair and bright green eyes, although his nose seemed to look a bit more like
his father’s. At least that’s what John’s mother had said. She had also said he
had his father’s restlessness one day when little Henry managed to grab a pair
of sunglasses and started banging on his father’s head with them. Leaving the house proved to be quite
difficult for John since he was carrying his briefcase in one hand, he had a
couple of blueprints in the other, the hallway was full with balloons and the front
door was covered with a big treasure map that didn’t allow the doorknob to be
seen. Somehow, he managed to leave without stepping on a single balloon. On his way to work, John turned on
the radio in his car but only got static noise even though he tried several
stations. He thought the receiver might have been damaged during the storm from
the night before, although he did not remember at that moment that the car had
been safely parked inside the garage. He was about to turn the radio off when a
sharp noise started emitting from the speakers. The noise got louder and
suddenly stopped after a few seconds. © 2015 willmorganAuthor's Note
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