consumed by darkness 2nd version

my rage it sters like a wild beast

waiting for the moment when it shal be releesed

at the drop of a pin it takes control

the river of darknes in which drounds my soul

though some rightchasness in my hears still exists

it will soon crumble in this foul demons fist

though iv strugled to keep my humanity out of his grasp

i fear this verry tainted day might just be my last

 

Author's Note

plees help with spelling for i have no dictionary or spell chek and strugle with it above alll els

Reviews

[ZoZo's mommy]

i like it babby it flows very well

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem