consoomd by darkness

my rage it sters like a wild beast

unpredictable reddy to be unleashed at the drop of a pin

unstableat anny piont in time i could be lost

consumed buy hatrid feer rage

doing things iv only dremt about in nightmers

at last its unleeshed the evle inside me

it screems insanity from all of my orfices

i will disroy all who linger in my presence

i drink the bload of my enamys and my rage grows

a deep evle flows  around me

like a rageing river reddy to consom all in its path

my soul grows weeker smutherd buy hatred

i loos a bit moor of myself

as i comit countliss sins of the flesh

raised to be cristian just to fall at the hands of demens

i will never escape there trechery now

i embrace there gidince grow in there power

bast in the glorry of my unholy master

Author's Note

unfinished

Reviews

[Redbird]

i like this alot. its deep and confusing but thats what i like about it.
Thought i dont really read poems much, this is a good one even if it is unfinished