the ripper

writen for a contest about jak the ripper

prowling the street in the dead of night

 prawling for my viktom a whor will diy tonight  

i slit her throght with the utmost of care 

a feeling of power into her cold eyes i stare

to walk thees streets at night is the furthist thing from smart 

for i lerk in the shadows reddy to rip u apart

 

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem about the ripper.

[Ebb and Flow]

Aside some some spelling issues I really like this.