Immortal

 I am becoming

Immortal

Infallible

Indestructable

A golden_god

I am becoming

A juggernaut

My power

Stretching

To the ends of the earth

Feed me

With_sacrifices

Trust in me and

Fall

as_well

 

 

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

dude pretty cool, your writing structure is kinda cool and overall variety of wording and feelings. good work.

-Will

[Sseoni]

Wow! What an amazing poem! I really liked it! It was very well written, and greatly detailed! The words were very powerful! I really enjoyed reading your poem! :D

[wolfshrew]

I had a strong reaction to this. I yelled out of satisfaction.

[Jeddie]

The way you set it out is some powerful it brings a whole new meaning to the words. WOW!

[Mary]

I like it!!! the way you typed it is ah-maz-zing.