Deafening Silence

Once a loud place now forcefully hushed

The steps of ferocious yet playful feline

Razzle-dazzle throughout the place

Still yet thunderous paws

The noisy a*s crickets yelling and screaming

Speechless they became before sunlight

How I wish I could find and kill them now

And once more hush this loud place

I talk to the loud and mute waves

I listen to their silent harangue

I told them about how I've been

They were closemouthed as always

In this loud silence, I remember you

Your ferocious and playful movement

Your thunderous and quite words

Your silent and loud smile

How I love this silence, this deafening sound

For it reminds me of you

Author's Note

I openly accept criticism :3 THANKS!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Sometimes silence is needed.
"In this loud silence, I remember you
Your ferocious and playful movement
Your thunderous and quite words
Your silent and loud smile"
The above lines. Powerful person described. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lostnstars]

This is my favorite writing of yours, I love how you somehow connect your fourth stanza to the first one. I always look forward for more poems. Please keep on writing :)

U GO PUFFIN (!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
-Blue Jay x

[Hurry]

Its nice to hear constructive words from you! But I'm not worthy of your praise senpai HAHAHAH

THANKS BLUE JAY!
-Puffin :3

[Nathan the Sane]

This is really a great poem. I love the use of sound to show memories, especially sad ones like this. Keep up the great work!