Icy

Basically, about heartbreak.

You turned 

my veins into flowers,

my ribs into fields,

and made my mouth

whisper the loveliest things,

but even the prettiest flowers

decay

and the greenest fields

wither away

and the most beautiful words

are forgotten

when love

turns rotten.

Reviews

[Anjali]

This poem needs to have more feedback, it deserves it. It's amazing! The words you've written and the rhyming scheme is just flawless! I absolutely admired it,a lot. Just beautiful!

[SpiceCookie]

I love this poem!! I like words you used to describe heartbreak, and how it also rhymes. Great job, and keep writing! :3