Love

My feeling for Hira

Biting at my chest

Clawing from inside

Blooming through my spine

I feel

 

Awakened from the stupor

Old emotions are shade

In the luster of my love

 

Shocked by clarity

breaking out of my shell

taking my first steps

falling out of the nest

feeble

 

Author's Note

I know this sucks but be specific is your criticisms.

Reviews

[lauren emily]

This doesn't suck! I think it's wonderful! You did an awesome job on this.

Keep it up!

Lauren