The story of Lloyd and friends, they encounter bizarre and dangerous events happening in Lemuria, mysterious monsters menace their lives and many others as a corporation plots to overtake the world.
This story isn't complete yet, I'm writing when I have time, writers block attacks me often, I began making this story up in late 2004 which explains why I've written so much, but for the first time I'm posting it on the net. Anyways, sorry for any grammatical mistakes in advance. I'm still updating all the chapters every time I make one, I don't want to make anything fall out of place.
My Review
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The only thing I really ask for my reviews is to be as bold as you can, any little detail could help my story be even better, so I trust you guys to review my story, it's obviously not complete, I'm almost finished with it. And just in case you're wondering if the story will be unchangeable, well, it's not, this is more a beta, though most of the plot will stay almost identical to the beta and characters as well. I will turn back to correct any mistakes that are illogical to the rest of the story.
this book is awesome,the plot and the characthers are very interesting,the battles are bad a*s, it also makes sense, i highly recomend this book to all fantasy lovers or people who love books in general, like Dragon Rebirth,you won't regret reading it!
Ahora si voy a tener que ponerme a leer E.A. completa, hahaha. Mira, te gusta que te dejen los comments y eso en Espanol o prefieres que sean en Ingles?
The only thing I really ask for my reviews is to be as bold as you can, any little detail could help my story be even better, so I trust you guys to review my story, it's obviously not complete, I'm almost finished with it. And just in case you're wondering if the story will be unchangeable, well, it's not, this is more a beta, though most of the plot will stay almost identical to the beta and characters as well. I will turn back to correct any mistakes that are illogical to the rest of the story.
I love to write and draw, not much other than that.
Elemental Ascension creation date:
September 10th, 2004
Contest Awards:
A New Fantasy Era Contest:
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