Sweet and Pretty

Sweet and Pretty

A Poem by SJ.
"

just a little something

"

Chilly weather, sweet forever

Happy endings never last

Fate holds on but not for long,

In the blink of an eye,

You could be gone.

Lust is like a flower

Sweet and pretty

But can die in an instant.

 

© 2008 SJ.


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this is a nice one i must say though the end becomes awkward
"Lust is like a flower
Sweet and pretty
But can die in an instant."
that last line seems just a little bit awkward...

(i hope you dont mind my suggestions)


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a positive connotation and lust
what a rare combination.
nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 18, 2008

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SJ.
SJ.

Dallas, TX



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