Never Enough

Never Enough

A Poem by SJ.
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I just sat down and wrote this...ha

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Love is never enough,

The world corrupts the meaning.

Stretches the truth until it's

Nothing but lies and loss of integrity.

Love is more than physical,

Become emotionally intertwined.

And you will reach it.

Reach truth, happiness, joy, hope.

That is love, real love.

© 2008 SJ.


Author's Note

SJ.
it's not cynical, I just hate that people use the word loosely to each other.

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I have to admit, I only caught a glimpse of your profile, the teenager - I sense that in your definition of love. It is so much more and you will have the poetic talent to see that through time - it should be by all means hwat you wrote - it really should...

it is patience
lost time
tolerance
forgiveness

and you are right - it should be joyful -

beautiful sentiments, thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ahhh and here is the piece i have been waiting for from you! =) this one i like! this one has some emotion behind it that helps convey your thoughts and meanings.... its a good leap from your others =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clean, clear and undeniable. I like it a lot!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel the optimism and fresh emotions in this easy to read piece. Alas, if only true love was as easy to obtain as it was in reading this very cool poem. I did not get any cynical vibes from this poem at all. It is a positive and promising piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have to admit, I only caught a glimpse of your profile, the teenager - I sense that in your definition of love. It is so much more and you will have the poetic talent to see that through time - it should be by all means hwat you wrote - it really should...

it is patience
lost time
tolerance
forgiveness

and you are right - it should be joyful -

beautiful sentiments, thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SJ.
SJ.

Dallas, TX



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