So...

You say it so often,

And its many a time I've heard,

You decrease it's value,

Whenever you say the word.

 

Do you mean its how you feel,

How you felt from the start,

If its so, let me know,

From the bottom of your heart.

 

You say the word too easy,

Its like breathing air,

Is this just an illusion,

So that I think you care.

 

You say it so sharply,

Often on the fly,

Theres too many letters in that word,

So take out the r, r and y.

Reviews

[MrJodie]

There's no other way to describe this. CLEVER! What a whimsical way to share a bitter sentiment. You actually took the sting out of it but presented it in a very memorable way.

BRAVO!

I think the only thing I, personally, would do differently is capitalize the R, R and Y to make them stand out as individual letters. Otherwise, cut, print, that's a wrap! Nice work.