THE LOST

Every moment is driving he weak 
Making it hard to know which road to seek 

She tried so hard pondering many reason

Still remained empty handed passed many seasons 

With ray of hope she cried, begging reasons to the one all feared 

Ray dimmed, hopes crashed with questions unanswered 

She shattered, but she fought and yet lost 

Now there was none to rely on none to pay cost 

there lied a secret she was destined to find
Shattered reasons lied near but sight faked mind
never believed truths she came across 
now she'll never be the one i knew she was 

Reviews

[AMP]

Wow... I don't exactly know what to make of this... I mean, I do, but it's hard to word in a short review. I wasn't expecting as much as I got from this when I saw it on the surface. This is WAY deeper than it first appears to be. Excellent, excellent work.

[Summer D.]

Great write! Again you should work on the format. I really do like the message of your writes anyway. They're somewhat thought provoking. " The Lost." Really appropriate title. Thanks for sharing.

[Harmonica winds]

Whoa! I sincerely loved this write, your emotions run deep. Awesome rhyme scheme and flow.

[L]

Great write. There's so much to this piece and it's very well worded. I look forward to reading more of your work :)

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

WOw! the flow of emotions here is great. nicely written, Wijdan!