Broken Up.

Broken Up.

A Poem by Sanantha
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I really didn't know what to call this one. It's about feelings after a breakup.

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How could you?
Didn't you feel me as I held your hand?
Stroked your hair?
Kissed your lips?
Didn't you hear me as I talked to you?
Laughed with you?
Longed for you?
Didn't you see me as I cared for you?
Dressed for you?
lived for you?
Didn't you understand?!
I poured my heart into you!
My soul!
My mind!
My hard-earned love!
I shaped and molded you, and couldn't imagine life without you!
And you took it from me!
You stole my heart.
You took my will.
You clutch my soul in your palms.
I loved you.
How could you?

© 2010 Sanantha


Author's Note

Sanantha
I know, it's a deeper tone than what I usually write, but it helped me release some anger, and I'm wondering if you guys think it's any good. please comment and such.

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this is sad but written with an innocence..How could you? a question we all ask...well done

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Sanantha
Sanantha

Fox Point, WI



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