A Kiss

My first real poem. Enjoy.

your lips meet mine

for a second.

just a second.

but i can tell

it means

forever.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

Something so little becomes so big defined by words makes it even more of a precious moment. To be able to captivate the reader with small words, simple, and meangingful. Its so simple, the diction is precise to keep it and make it into the art that it is. Everyone is right short and sweet is the definition of this poem. That is why I choose to give this a hundred. I thank you for sharing.

[J.S. Pua]

short..
sweet..

[deeps]

short and sweet

[.]

short and so very sweet, that made me smile :)