Time

about passing time

I had youth ,, and with it time,
I had dreams , all was fine.
Happiness ,  within my grasp.
I had time . but it passed.

Filled with dreams , eyes aglow.
Heartbreak ? How could I know .
Changing my sails at half mast,
I found love , that didn't  last.

Older , wiser, living alone.
No need to hurry .  No one is home !
I had it all -Nothing last.
I had time , but that too passed.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

A really nice poem, time waitings for no man.

[pam love]

THANKS FOR YOUR TIME

[Gee]

Aye, you wake up one day and wonder how and where all of the years went.
Should " past" lines 4 and 12 be passed ?
Enjoyed the read

[pam love]

OH I missed that ....thanks .

[Sneh]

I enjoyed this short write. Time wait for none, indeed. And you've designated it much better here.. Thanks for sharing!
Sneh

[pam love]

thanks , I have only been here a minute , still nervous about sharing my thoughts.

[wordman]

i guess time passes faster than we realize
liked the write

[pam love]

appreciate you taking the time to read my lil ditty

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Lanny]

Good rhythmic effect, and I enjoyed the insightful message about life.

Thanks for the read, and all the best,

Lanny

[pam love]

thanks so much