Who Danced?<3

I really don't have a purpose with this. Based on a fond memory of mine; still, criticism would be fine. Just understand that there is no destination.

We were walking past some
Unfinished stores, where
Eyes we couldn’t see
Followed our dance, and
He said, she said, that said
He’s not him, he just is,
And we
Started a conversation that
Turned to debate
That opened the eyes
We could see, and those
We couldn’t-
And he proved, she proved
That proved he is, and
All I discovered is that
I most definitely am, whether
She says I say he said, or
Vice versa.
A he is a she minus
One letter; to him
Or her
It’s hearts AND parts,
And that makes her
Different from him
And how we are.
This we discovered
In the dance for those eyes-
As we whistled and snapped
And watched our doubles
Do their thing-
And he pointed out that she looked
Like he said I used to, and that
We is she and him and I
And we are, and I countered
That all we are is him and her,
Not or,
And we agreed, and waved,
And left as one.

Reviews

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The line "so getting back" pulled me directly out of the image your words were creating. Seemed almost as if you were talking directly to me in the moment. Feels like it throws off the flow of every line before and after. Beyond that line, i was drawn in, I became him and you became her.