jeff.<3

Yeah. xx.

the giant spiked studs
on your bottom lip press
into my neck
as you talk about everything,
and i'm listening so i
can catch anything important
that could make me love
you more.
it's only an hour after
you asked if i'd like
to be dating, to which
i said sure,
and you've already wrapped
your hands with your red chipped
polish around my heart.
am i easy?
i'm wondering how i could find
someone as wonderfully
crazy
as you are.
you keep pulling me close
and my resolve keeps faltering
each time i catch
the scent of your shampoo,
which i faintly recognize,
and the words you keep
whispering deliciously
in my ear, just for us,
as ben talks about the cops
and steven agrees and holly
just ignores the fact your
face is in my neck.
the giant spiked studs
on your bottom lip press
into my neck
as you talk about everything,
and i'm thanking the stars
you were single, i was short,
and we both needed someone
to whisper to.

Reviews

[amelia.elaine]

the line

steven agrees with holly


i think its because I felt, i might be the only one that feels this way
but i felt like it was really personal
like it was something that should be just you and the person

then you mention other people
i don't know, maybe its just me

=]

[apple_to_apple]

hehehehehe

[amelia.elaine]

ok so i loved this, but at the same time i only liked this.
i love you're style, i always have.
i like that it has a realistic feel to it, and its like you're putting me in the scene
and i find that a lot of people struggle with that in poetry
but at the same time there were VERY few lines that i didn't like
but my favorite part was the last four lines
and expecially the last TWO

amazing band.aid