who were you thinking when you think of anyone who could love you, the way you love someone, who doesn't love you, you don't think of love, anymore the way you used to, since you found love remains parallel with how much life you could only give away, the line you intersect doesn't curve to a circle, embracing you, you thought you'd remain a faint line, across the world's face, not a gash, but a line, not leaving a trail away, you've forgotten your own face
Rambling thoughts leaving me to think you are describing a person who just lost a love or a person who feels insignificant in the mind of the world. Interesting write. Lydi**
i think it's both - since the beloved becomes the whole and only world for the lover - but since the.. read morei think it's both - since the beloved becomes the whole and only world for the lover - but since the beloved doesn't love the lover - the lover thinks he has lost the world along with the beloved - thank you so much for the insight and lovely visit - been missing you :)
steph
8 Years Ago
I have posted.
8 Years Ago
i have read and commented on your poem, my friend :) please post some more - and i'll read and revie.. read morei have read and commented on your poem, my friend :) please post some more - and i'll read and review it :)
NOTE: Formerly my pen-name on this site is letterhead, but since i also have an account on DeviantArt, with a different pen-name, which is highonwords (stephanie) - i am going to use highonwords here .. more..