ellipsis heart
A Poem by highonwords
you put a period to love, when i would have loved you, endlessly under asterisks putting as many periods to your every period, only this time, we've ran out of paper, and i found a box full of love notes to you, from someone, so i put our love in parenthetical seclusion, until i hear an explanation i could quote to my heart, full of exclamatory questions, that i need to put a comma, between every beat of your name
© 2016 highonwords
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Love under the influence of punctuation. Reads unsettled and also dissatisfying, kind of sad. Interesting write.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
please tell me what reads unsettled and dissatisfying along the lines of the poem - i'd appreciate i.. read moreplease tell me what reads unsettled and dissatisfying along the lines of the poem - i'd appreciate it
steph
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8 Years Ago
I think the mood you created reads this way. I didn't mean it in negative way.
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8 Years Ago
the lover loves the beloved, but the beloved is cheating on the lover, the lover wants an explanatio.. read morethe lover loves the beloved, but the beloved is cheating on the lover, the lover wants an explanation why the beloved cheated, because the lover really loves the beloved - sorry for talking like this - it's the poetry getting into me
steph
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8 Years Ago
Ah ok. Thx for the explanation.
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8 Years Ago
you're welcome, my friend :)
steph
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Added on April 2, 2016
Last Updated on April 2, 2016
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highonwords
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NOTE: Formerly my pen-name on this site is letterhead, but since i also have an account on DeviantArt, with a different pen-name, which is highonwords (stephanie) - i am going to use highonwords here .. more..
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