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A Poem by highonwords
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a poem about a woman, abandoned with child by her lover, confiding to her friend

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upon looking at the man's face,
i turned to the woman beside him,
in a moment, i was alone with her,
in a cloister or a basement room,
somewhere cold and dark as whispers
she took my hand, and felt my pulse,
like riders in britches, horses,
galloping, my heart is only fodder
for the pain, feasting on its skin,
deep within its flesh, worming out
she said, i look like the bones of a funeral,
i was wearing red, i didn't look it,
she knew, i heard wedding bells,
without a groom, beyond the aisle,
only love, only a child, only a cradle



© 2016 highonwords


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This is sad...but somehow hopeful. I guess photographs have that effect upon me too sometimes...you know, the old, odd ones where you just wonder who the people were and why they seem so sad.


Posted 8 Years Ago


highonwords

8 Years Ago

i get that feeling, too, sometimes it's the other way around - why am i so said, when others are so .. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

8 Years Ago

Sometimes being too introspective can interfere with life and the living of it so, yes, I understand.. read more
highonwords

8 Years Ago

thank you so much, fabian, for the thoughtful gesture - much appreciated :)

steph
Your vignette imparts many powerful feelings that could apply to other situations, not just the one described in your byline. I got a little confused which "she" is the friend the narrator is sharing with & which one (if any) is the "other woman" (possibly?) But those confusions didn't detract from the reading of the piece. I like the way you describe pain in very original terms. Heartbreak is written about so much, but it's rare to read it being compared to a powerful trampling horse. Love this & many other analogies.

Posted 8 Years Ago


highonwords

8 Years Ago

hi margie - an uncle of mine told me that when a woman is pregnant, her pulse and the pulse of the c.. read more

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Added on March 18, 2016
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NOTE: Formerly my pen-name on this site is letterhead, but since i also have an account on DeviantArt, with a different pen-name, which is highonwords (stephanie) - i am going to use highonwords here .. more..

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