Beautiful piece!
This shows what humans are made of; different faces they collected from their past. Certainly, we cannot judge a person when it comes to loving because simply there are no rules, no manuals. Sometimes it's safer to believe emotions are probably beyond our understanding. The guy here ends up loving the girl regardless to her past, helping her brush 'the dirt off', decorating her darkest corners with light and hope for a whole new beginning.
Loved it!
Intriguing piece, steph. My mind wandered on this and it led me to the story of a girl with a spoiled reputation but who, nonetheless, love selflessly. Then came this guy, who was smitten with her intimate ability but eventually he fell in love with her despite her dark past. I know you want constructive criticism but i will leave that to those with technical expertise. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
is it a true story, ate gabs?
8 Years Ago
It is, but the ending was, unfortunately, a tragedy.:)
The girl discovered she had HIV. She left the guy because she could not bear to see him walk away fr.. read moreThe girl discovered she had HIV. She left the guy because she could not bear to see him walk away from her.
oooo ooooo...this reminds me of high school parking...Catholic girls and we Catholic boys...always being tempted by the wild passion which hits a wall and leaves us breathless and wanting---
and yet...the love is too young to match the physical...we are not emotionally ready to understand it all...so we clean ourselves up, and return to our confessionals...spruce up until the next engagement gets us close to that edge again.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
i love your comment, j, 'spruce up until the next engagement gets us close to that edge again', than.. read morei love your comment, j, 'spruce up until the next engagement gets us close to that edge again', thank you for your insights, always appreciate your visits :)
Certainly graphic! We are all multi-faceted individuals. You ask for constructive criticism....here is an edit for you....the bells of cathedrals,tinkles with your name,....the verb and noun do not agree. it should be "the bells of cathedrals tinkle with your name." Lydi*
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you for the review and the correction, ma'am
NOTE: Formerly my pen-name on this site is letterhead, but since i also have an account on DeviantArt, with a different pen-name, which is highonwords (stephanie) - i am going to use highonwords here .. more..