Looking Through the Keyhole of The Doors Of Perception

Seeing through the keyhole of the doors of perception.

Building these walls with hand fulls of our conception.

 

Perplexing people with 

"Wanna getta room" lines

Spew the nonsense 

we wade through.

The appetite 

for destruction

Paves The Way

says the serpent's

voice mail,

business card,

and license.

Synchronized melodies 

placating senses 

blurred 

like time's 

forgotten masses.

Blood bath and 

beyond your reach,

with brains blown out 

in the alienated architect 

of sleep.

Reviews

[Dylan A. Miller]

This is amazing in its simplicity. And please don't take simplicity the wrong way. There is simplicity that is effortless, then there is simplicity that captures true magic, and can make you think harder than the most intricate penning. I love the subject matter. From reading your writing, and seeing what you've reviewed of mine, (and I could be wrong, but...) I feel that both you and I share a...disgust, to be honest, for society and what has become of humanity. I loved this piece though, good work, and keep writing.

Xavier

[charlotte talley]

this is a good write. keep at it.

[Joiedevivre]

this poem reads almost like a scholar's rap and I like that.
Spew the nonsense
we wade through.
Love this line, defiant and full of the spirit of sarcasm.

[Victoria]

whoah i love this

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simplistically relevant and completely researched, well done

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Moving write. Succinct and telling. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha

[Alisia]

I like this very much, very dark. Reminded me of Bret Easton Ellis if he wrote poetry.

Wow, quite the powerful write here. {Well shared feelings, you express yourself very well}