Then It Ends And Everyone Dies. What A Happy Ending.

It hurts so much.

Pain controls you at the

beginning. 

You scream and shout and

cry and beg for someone-

anyone- to stop this pain. 

But no one listens.

You feel alone.

You feel dead already.

Then, it ends.

You give up.

You stick a knife through your

head, and end this pain.

You say no one will miss you.

You say no one cares about

you.

But at your funeral,

people cry.

Everyone cries.

Even the people who

hated you.

They cry because they

want to die to.

They are jealous of your suicide. 

They want to kill themselves too.

So they do.

They shove a gun down

their throat, and end

their own pain.

But this time, no one cries

at their funeral.

No one shows up.

Because they saw it coming.

They knew how un-happy they were.

So, everyone's dead.

Just because you were selfish

and wanted this pain to 

end.

Way to go.

Author's Note

This is confusing.

Reviews

[Alexis]

I'm not sure if the understanding I have of this poem is correct, but if I do, then I do think it was pretty creative, even though sad. I do understand and can relate to the feelings of loneliness and pain, as everyone can, so that helps in making this poem even more powerful. I wouldn't say that it's confusing -- it almost leaves the reader to figure it out for themselves what it means and that's great to me. Each person may read and interpret it differently which is incredibly interesting.
I do really like the idea you had here. However, suicide is never a good answer. I know a lot of people say that, but it's quite true. I agree with Coyote Poetry -- "better to stand your ground and fight".
Fantastic job. Thanks for sharing!

[Coyote Poetry]

No reward in suicide. Better to stand your ground and fight. Never know what may lay on the next road for you. I been to funeral of suicides. Just people with confusion and not understanding. Life is a roller coaster ride. Pleasure and pain can come at any time. Life is a long ride. Everyone have some sort of purpose. Suicide is just a excuse to escape because of fear and disappointment. A powerful poem. Made me think.
Coyote

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

wow... no not confusing at all just really deep emotion to be felt, and sad... really really good write, i couldn't stop reading it as the feelings in each line were there to read next after next until it was to the last line and the poem ended and even then the emotion was still felt... really nicely written and captured.

[Helpless]

well i think the title explains the whole poem. poetry doesn't always have to make complete sense to everyone, thats one of the beauties of it. awesome, at least in my opinion.

[Xx_Ashleigh_xX]

not confusing to me, i liked it :)

[brenda]

i can understand this ! its good ! :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like it a lot..
Great write...

~A Fallen Heroine~