Who Are You?

I haven't seen you for so long.

It feels like a million years.

I forgot about you, and you turned

into a ghost.

But now you are here again.

I need you stay away, when I

live my life.

I need you to leave me alone, 

when I do what I want. 

I don't need you to feed me

with your words, your insults and your

lectures.

I just need to be alone, and

stay away from this stranger you

have become. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem with real and honest emotion. Sometime need to say what you want and believe and hope you are left alone. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[brenda]

great write emoutons well penned i love it !:)

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh wow! I love this poem. It's so realistic and easily related to by many girls and boys. You're a great poet, congratz! :)

~Lizzard~

[Helpless]

captivating! love it!

[A Risen Heroine.]

You did such a great job on this :D
Thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Violet]

I really liked it, it reminds me of my "best" friend, sad. good job!

[Rocknroll821]

Both my mom and my dad are wheat I think of when I hear this. I used to know them so well and now wall I see are the old memories of who they were. Great job!

sound slike my dad and i relationship. good poem.

[Darryl Davis]

A ballad of the bad penny ;-) Nice one