the betrayer & the betrayed

the way you act is the way you lived.

when you kiss another girl,

when you smile receiving a text from a stranger's name,

when you disappear for the night and don't give news,

when you smell like another fragrance while i never changed mine.

it's all those things that show me what you didn't live.

you never lived the betrayal;

the lonely nights wondering if you are actually worth it, 

the tears falling for the one who'll never love you enough,

the fake smiles drawing on your face when you know he is lying. 

you never lived the betrayal,

you never loved a betrayer. 

but keep in mind, 

what goes around comes around, baby,

and one day,

the nights will be lonely, 

the tears will fall,

the fake smiles will hurt, 

and that day you'll realize what you did. 

that day you'll realize, there's so much more about someone,

than their bodies.

- mia angeli, the betrayer & the betrayed

Author's Note

tell me your opinions ;)

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Methinks you've opened your heart then coralled it with as much emotion as your mind allows! You've vented, said you piece, hurled truths.. and still finished with a touch of calm.. somehow. Fine writing, honest, sincere..

[Mia Angeli]

thank you ;)

[G. B. Banks]

God Mia how well you paint, that how one feels in those times. I know this feeling and I love how you tell it. Love the flowing ways of your words. Definitely want to read more! Cheers

[Mia Angeli]

thank you, rlly nice

[Franky]

This is good. A good description of a far too common problem-no doubt! There is a line in this write that is aweward though. the long line about the perfume. You should shorten it as it appears too long. Just a thought.

[Mia Angeli]

i'll keep that in mind, thanks for the tip ;)