Photograph of the Past

So just a little something I wrote when I was feeling down. For some reason though I am generally a happy person outside of home, all my writing comes of as depressing, harsh or something of the sort

As a little girl she lived

laughing and smiling all the time

She ran around the grassy yard

picking all the wildflowers she saw

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Innocent eyes as dark as can be

stared up smiling at she

from the picture frame next to her tea

She thinks "I wonder what happened to me?"

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Melancholy plagues those eyes today,

she doesn't recall far back enough to remember

when it started or when it will end

she goes nowhere, nowhere at all

wasting away her youth with pain in her heart

-G.G.

Author's Note

First poem I post, feedback would be greatly appreciated. Also I'm not even sure if I should continue with writing since in general I;m more math and science oriented and I don't really know what to think of my English skills.

Reviews

[Aneko]

Nice job! You should keep uploading stuff.