Hello you

Hello you

A Poem by WhoaitSarah

Hello you, it's good to see you again.

I haven't seen you since I don't know when.

It just seems so long ago

But now I want you to know

That I've waited for this moment for so long

But when I see you, you act like something is wrong.

Why are you acting like this?

You are definetely not the person I onced missed.

Now I see you in a different light,

But I still can't forget that amazing night.

Hello you, it's not so good to see you again,

I haven't seen the old you since I don't know when...

 

© 2008 WhoaitSarah


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This is a great piece.
I'm guessing that it is about somebody who the narrator was romantically involved with from the line "But I still can't forget that amazing night." Many times we realize that the people we once saw as perfect and flawless are just not the same people. We are blinded by love. I loved the ending.
Short and sweet! Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I loved the line ....

"Hello you, it's not so good to see you again"

Made me smile and chuckle to my self.
Don't you hate when that happens....lol
Anyway another great write!

Kelley

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great piece.
I'm guessing that it is about somebody who the narrator was romantically involved with from the line "But I still can't forget that amazing night." Many times we realize that the people we once saw as perfect and flawless are just not the same people. We are blinded by love. I loved the ending.
Short and sweet! Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2008

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WhoaitSarah
WhoaitSarah

Oklahoma city, OK



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Hi, i'm Sarah. And I'm just your average teenage girl. If you want to know about me, ask. (: more..

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