A Crush.

To me this sounds like something a little girl might write.. But this is how I felt.

Hour after hour you're all that's on my mind,
How can this be happening? That answer is hard to find.

I love just being with you, when we sit and talk all day,
Goofing off and having fun, never running out of things to say.

Do you think it's strange that all I do
Is draw little hearts and think of you?

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful poem, thanks so much for sharing.

[Sami The Hammi]

Oh my gosh...I know how that feels.

[larryb]

Well done and well said ...claps

[Chad Wesley Allbrett]

Nice. I rember feeling like that long ago. -"Never runing out of things to say." Yeah it was like that.

[world war jessica <3]

the last line is so sweetly true! Very cute

[Ed Rector]

how secretive... but crushes tend to be secretive... so well done...

[Candle in the wind]

Its not strange at all infact its beautiful only I hope you find total reciprocation.

[Pinky]

aww its cute and sweet! i like it!

[w. r.]

this is like a less emo version of my poem. good work.

[Aidan Cooney]

I can relate to this one, minus the little hearts. };)>