About A boy...

About A boy...

A Poem by WhoaitSarah

Yes I've fallen before and been hurt

Wanted to yell at the guy and push him in the dirt.

But you seem different from the rest,

My time with you is when I feel best.

I know stupid love poems are kind of cliche

But I have these feeling and I'm not sure how to say

That I've fallen for you fast, something I said I never do

I have a question: Do you even have a clue?

I like keeping this my little secret

You not knowing how I feel

So a secret this will remain

Because my heart needs time to heal.

© 2008 WhoaitSarah


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aw damn hearts getting in the way of new relationships... damn them... but very well put...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whatever the two people below me said fits well...i'm not a very good reviewererer. nice job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well
it catches the mood of hurtful person

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 8, 2008

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WhoaitSarah
WhoaitSarah

Oklahoma city, OK



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Hi, i'm Sarah. And I'm just your average teenage girl. If you want to know about me, ask. (: more..

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