Shimmering Eyes

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"Shimmering Eyes"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

Her eyes glimmer

Shimmer with beauty

I see her eyes

I see the love of my life

 

Waiting for her to shine

And holding on loosely

I see her eyes

That shimmer and glimmer

 

And what my heart says

Is that beauty

Is reborn in the man's heart

 

Her eyes glimmer

Shimmer with preciousnous

As I lay and think

Her eyes are always

In my heart and soul

 

My heart beats

And as she glares at me

I keep loving her

Every minute of my life

 

Her beautiful eyes

Glimmer and shimmer

And as her eyes

Shimmer and glimmer

She always will be

The LOVE OF MY LIFE!

Reviews

[brittneymarie]

This poem is amazing :]
i love it

[chris' girlfriend]

that is so beautiful

[lowena]

Very sweet poem. Im sure if she reads it will she will know how much you love her.

[forsaken_beauty]

Good poem..you can really tell that the person you were thinking about is definately the love of your life.

[Nely Amorim]

a very emotive piece i take it you love her eyes..lol well written and lovely :)

[Sabbath_Nikole]

I like the feeling of your poem, theres a lot of raw emotion in it. I did think that you repeated eyes, and shimmer and glimmer but that may have been your point. you should try using some synomyms or something just to mix it up. Overall great piece!