Being Loved

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"Being Loved"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

To be true

To be loved

Is so romantic

 

Romance will come

And I will love you so much

Kissing your body everywhere

Hearing your voice

Im being in love

 

Being in love

And being loved

Seems to gradually gain more steps

Of love and more feelings

And its not over till

I see your beautiful face

 

When you cry

Dont worry

I'll love you honey

Well be loved together

And always!!

Forever

 

True feelings for each other

Means we truly love being in love

I hold your hand

And say I love you over and over again

 

Nicole

Your so pure and I love seeing your face

Seeing it

Makes me

Love you so many times

And I'm

Being Loved

Reviews

[Death's Poet]

Beautiful sweet poem. I adore love poems and have read many in my day and I am still very impressed.

Since I didn't see a note about ignoring spelling, I would suggest changing the your in "Your so pure" to You're. But other than that I am very very impressed with this.

[DarkIriswriter]

That was a great poem.I love it....I remeber getting my first poem out of love it was wonderful I still have it even though he is gone now.I am happy for you! great description and input.

sara

[EvesDaughter]

:) This made me smile. Every girl
deserves a poem like this at least
once in her life. Keep on being
in love...it's a great way to live ;)

[bookitty]

Wow...that was so beautiful and poignant! Thank you for the friend request. I loved this poem, it was just so precious, it flowed like water to me. The short lines and pauses in-between gives the reader time to digest and marvel at your words. Your feelings are so deep and I'm astounded by your writing ability and depth and the flow of your words. I was about your age when I started taking writing seriously and I just published my first book. Don't ever stop writing, you never know where it will lead and your future looks as bright as the sun sweetheart.....

Peace and blessings
Lakiya Lindsey