My Time

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"Its My Time"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

Thinking

Day after day

I dream about you

Think about you

 

I write my poems for you

And for you only

Its my time

My time to shine

 

These hands create love

Love creates my heart

Timing is the essence

My time is near

Its my time

 

Seeing your face shine

And saying I Love You

Makes my heart keep going after you

Again

And

Again

 

The world revolves around you to me

And when I look into your eyes

They shine with enlightenment

 

My time

Has come

When you come to me

Your time comes

While my time has

CAME!

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

Perhaps it is simply because I am lingering off in left field this evening as I read this, but I find this to present an interesting metaphor of making love with the one you love. There is that subtle transition from writing poems of love to the hands continuing to create love as they move with a poetry of their own. Perhaps it is simply the rhythm and how making love is a form of poetry in of itself, but one can imagine being with the one they desire - allowing their desires to touch - and the magic that would flow as time comes and goes...

[jennjenn]

Wow! Hun that is deep. That is really really good. I seriously want to get to know you better. I can tell now by just reading this poem you have a deep, strong heart made for loving.


xoxo jenn

[Ember]

Interesting choice of words, good rythm.. I like it.