The First Kiss

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"The First Kiss"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

Holding her hand

Spin her around

Bringing her close to me

And smiled

 

Looked into her eyes

Seeing her joyful feeling in my heart

Bring her close to me

And say "I love you"

 

Chillin all day

Loving her every god damn moment

I have so much to say to her

Cant let the words slip off my lips

 

Looking

Searching for her heart in my mind

I let my mind set freely

I take the time to think

And wonder

 

Nervously I look at her

And I say the magic words

And before they get released

There!

 

Words can not take the place of it

Smiling at her

And her smiling at me

I will remeber

The first kiss

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

Definitely a piece that would melt a lady's heart. It offers that exciting mix of the detailed journey and the vague destination, offering them all a chance to remember their own first kiss. Well done.

[BellaMac]

Great poem!!! it really painted a picture in my mind..... and your pretty cute yourself

[Lauren Burch]

First kisses are always so special. You did a wonderful job of penning the emotions and visuals. Stunningly sweet. Good read! :)

[Kaitlyn]

This is great! You really paint a picture of what the moment is supposed to look like and it has alot of feeling to it!
Great job

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I absolutely love this....terrific job, and oh, did I mention? I absolutely love this!