The Silent Night

Bright pale moon shine
Star gleams in the dark sky
Freezing wind dancing in the air
Insects made symphony to paint the night
 
Polluted cloud came
They took the insects melodies
They stole the light from the stars
Creates the dark silent night
 
Yet, the light never gone
The light is always paint the night
Even the darkness swallowed the moon and stars
 
Sometimes, you will felt losing your dream
But, your dreams is always shine in the dark
Like the polluted moon and stars
 
Even though the cloud stole them
They still gleaming in your heart
Awaits you in another silent night ahead

Author's Note

My old bestie poem.. as a beginning for the new collection in the new website, hopefully you'll enjoy my introduction! comments and critics are welcomed

Reviews

[Fist]

Nice poem silver..:) I really look forward to read more "silvery" poems from you. :)

[Silver Cocoon]

thank you for your review Fist! i really appreciate it! now i'm still moving my old poems first

[Fist]

Thats great. :-)