Love as old as time

Joy as insurmountable as a river,

Smiles as bright as the sun,

Laughter as beautiful as a waterfall,

Love as old as time.

Nights as warm as the sand on a beach,

Days where the sun never stops shinning,

Weekends together that bring countless memories,

Love as old as time.

A touch as smooth as the grass,

A hug soft and warm as a teddy bear.

A kiss as sweet as a rose,  

Love as old as time.

A First Date to make you curious and suspicious,

A ticket to make you late and a bill to make you cry,

A smile to take away the pain, 

Love as old as time.

A few months to share some stories,

Time together that brings pain and joy,

Days to spend every hour at each others side,

Love as old as time.

A few years to make you inseparable,

A plan for forever comes to light,

A wedding to make you happy.

Love as old as time.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for my brothers wedding in 2008 and it was spoken for their ceremony

Reviews

[Kelso]

really good!! i like it, it's beautiful. will you review my poetry?