Black Angel

Black Angel

A Story by Matt Shutler

Through the smoke his face comes into view. The face of the man who killed his wife; the man who took her beauty from the world. Fighting his fury, his mind races. After a few moments of indecision and blind passion, his mind finally clears. He raises his gun and pulls the trigger.
 

© 2008 Matt Shutler


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Matt!!! Damn!! Nice. This is the perfect contest for you- short, simple, and amazing.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OK, that was kind of too short for the "murder and suicide" story and I mean very short. But, it's all good...

Posted 17 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Black Angel", good to go with the title along the story content. I was curious, yet, somehow I was surprised after reading it. Truly a short, simple - Beginning, middle and end - story. Great one on this. :)

EC.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short, sweet and to the point.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

i like it becuz the man killed his wife....very exciting

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very well written...i can see his face...his mind races and i can feel his confusion and anger... nice work!

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Hmm very dramatic :D
and very stunning, I can almost
feel what the man is thinking,
and feeling.

Maybe a little overdone. but AWESOME.
its really good.

Posted 17 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.


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Matt Shutler
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