Broken Love.

Through my sadness I produce sad poetry. That's just nice.

I'm going crazy
God, I'm going insane
I'm trying to forget
But I'm trying in vain

I loved you, darling -
Do you still love me?
I can't help but wonder,
Do you miss what we used to be?

We went to hell and back
To fight for our love
Darling, you were my angel of sweet misery
Sent from heaven above

Your lips haunt my dreams
My mind is now a struggle within
I shutter softly as your ghost
Gently brushes against my skin

My head is spinning
Darling, save me please
I'm crying, Im dying inside
From our bittersweet memories,

What's the day? The hour?
God, I don't even care
It doesn't feel I'm here -
It just feels like I'm not there,

Can you feel my pain, darling?
Can you see my tears?
I'm forgetting you, darling
But I can't forget the years.

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'I can't help but wonder,
Do you miss what we used to be? '

time is a big healer and i think that is what you need, time to get over the rollercoaster of emotions, the bitter/sweet memories. i liked how you explored your thoughts and the flow of this piece. you have great flow :)

[whiteNight]

Your reviews are so wonderful! Thank you again for the great words. Really means a lot!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Nice poem, the lines "We went to hell and back
To fight for our love", I think you should had just left him in hell and come back without him, if he took you there, you might as well take the opportunity to leave him there, you don't want a person like that, you want a person that can take you to heaven.

[whiteNight]

Haha thanks. It means so much that you liked it(:
You know, I should've. Haha I really should've.
But that saying 'Better lost in love than never to have love at all' holds true.
Though you are completely right.
Thank you for the kind words(:

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Cool. now that you've been there that is a place you don't want to go back to, look at the road and keep an eye on the signs.

[whiteNight]

Thanks for everything you've said(:
Really, it means a lot!