Poisoned Soul

Poisoned Soul

 

The poison in my veins is flowing fast,

The more I take the less it lasts.

Familiar ghosts of future’s past,

Burning flags of half mast.

Vivid dreams of all the same,

My disorder said I’m sane.

There’s a sickness in my soul,

A personal relentless private Troll.

There’s a darkness in my heart,

Slowly tearing me apart.

Judgement looms, I know I’m prone.

I hope and pray that I’m welcomed home.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is dark and vividly haunting.. clearly troubled by repeated paths with the same, insignificant outcomes.. lonely, painful, regretful, contemplative. “Burning flags of half mast” this is a good line.. you may not want to capitalize “Troll” since that just reminded me of that creepy movie and I think you’re being more generic here, but still invitingly dark writing.

[vigilantebastard]

Thanks so much, i didn't even notice about the capital "T".. you are right, i think ill change that... My poen "Where are you, My lonely" should really be called just "My lonely" i think too.. Thats a very personal one actually - if you havmt read it.. by all means do.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh, I will. Thanks! :)